carnal love - the only spark.
throws spark a ray of desire,
heat of which 'll make you perspire.
desire: how it's defined?
love in a form more refined.
door to bed a journey divine.
on thy feet are placed mine.
ah! a halt here will be haste,
pace slow:-:trust is not a time waste.
just there the carpet ditched,
both of us right there slipped.
god's move seemed that slip,
an awesome way to end this trip.
a look alike that makes me shy.
what was that???....
ReplyDeletethat wasn't being a critique.....
ReplyDeletei actually decided not to perverse the whole thing thats all n express each move
ReplyDeletewithout being direct with both actions and words